Hey [Candidate’s Name], I’ve just come off the phone with [Client Name], and I’ve got some great news — they’d love to offer you the role! 🎉
Before I get into the details, I just want to say they were really impressed with [insert a strength or moment, e.g., how you presented your market knowledge in the final interview or your drive and energy]. You really stood out.
Now, let me walk you through the offer they’ve put together for you…
The base salary is £43,000, with an uncapped commission structure. Commission kicks in from [insert threshold], and based on what others at your level are earning, you’d be realistically looking at an OTE of [e.g., £60–65K] in year one.
There’s also [add: quarterly bonus / equity / wellbeing budget / annual incentive trips / any benefits they mentioned caring about].
The benefits package includes [highlight what’s meaningful to the candidate – e.g., private healthcare, hybrid working, gym allowance, etc.].
In terms of career trajectory — this isn’t just a job, it’s a stepping stone 🚀. They see you progressing quickly, and in the short term they’re already talking about setting you up for [insert milestone: e.g., ‘Senior Consultant within 12 months’ or ‘building your own vertical’].
You’ll also have access to [L&D offering, mentorship, leadership programmes, etc.].
And you’ll be working in a hybrid model – typically 3 days in office and 2 from home, but with flexibility depending on client meetings and performance. They’re focused on output, not clock-watching ⏱️.
You mentioned earlier in the process that [insert motivation – e.g., ‘leadership development’, ‘a clearer path to management’, ‘a more collaborative culture’] was a priority for you — and this role really delivers on that. You’ll have [manager’s name] as your mentor, and you’re joining a team where [insert culture value – e.g., internal progression, transparency, etc.].